As you can see, I have made some changes to my DPS, as my previous draft didn't really look enough like the magazine I was focusing on. I have changed the centre image by creating a polaroid image frame; I though this would appeal more to my teenage target audience as it is slightly slanted and not neat and perfect. I have also added a lot more colour to the page by making the background a colour from my chosen colour pallet (baby pink) I think this adds a lot more depth to the DPS and makes it look more professional.
I also added some sub headings to the article to make it easy for the reader to know which topic is in different paragraphs, "anxiety" and "Fight or flight" and i have inserted these in a darker pink. Further more, the "Six steps to a less stressed you" is similar to my last draft, although I have tried to align the sub headings so they look neater as well as the numbers which I have slightly slanted and made a bolder colour. I have inserted a line below the article with the magazine name in the left hand corner. |
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